All Comments on 'Clawing Back Professionally'

Your characters, Australian or not, are always crude Okkers.

Shame really.

When the younger girl tells him, In the middle of sex, that she's going back to her old boyfriend because he's too old and isn't good at anal sex, and he's just like oh ok. Nope no guy on the planet would react like that to such a cold hearted woman and such an emasculating comment.

Also, when Gloria rejects his proposal and he's like yeah, ok I see that... again no way a guy who was that much in love to propose wouldn't have been hurt by that rejection. The overall story and plot was very interesting

So, let’s see if we can get this straight. Is it Geo or Leo? You’ve got LOTS of spelling errors and inappropriate words. Try to get someone to read this stuff before publishing.

THANK YOU !

I thoroughly enjoyed reading your creation !