All Comments on 'Clem and Tracy Pt. 01'

Awesome story even without the sex I want to to read more

Girl, 👏🏿

"The waiting's the hardest part." Great beginning!

Oh the old master yarn spinner comes through again. Love your work, Big Guy. You have another winner started here just let Clem fiend his balls as the story progresses. Maria did a job on him. In real life I would say he allowed Maria to do a job on him but this is fiction. The way you are developing Tracy, she can wrap him in knots if he doesn't rejuvenate. Not trying to lead the writer just giving feedback.

Really looking forward to the following chapters. Keep it going this one really has potential.

Cheers

SAGE

Great start, and I'm anxiously waiting for part 2.

Great start to what will be an excellent story.

Great story!

5

Clem really is a knucklehead. I’m wondering how many times he’ll screw it up before getting it right.

So far so good. Great build up with interesting characters and I'm looking forward to part two. BTW, I'm partial to yellow panties myself LOL.

Peter’s a little TOO comfortable in his ‘aw shucks’ persona, but I trust you’ve got plans to move him along. Great story so far! 😎

I absolutely love how you build up your stories, I have no doubt how amazingly you wrote romance stories.

I like our stories and know you are a popular author, but this one could use some editing. Lots of commas where they should not be, stringing clauses together (comma splices)... "I was ready for whatever lie ahead," etc. Just interferes with the flow of the story. I am not a grammar purist but it got in the way this time. BTW, he really is quite the knucklehead. I look forward to reading more.

Very good beginning to what seems to be shaping up to be an excellent story. Looking FORWARD to Part two.

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What a sweet start. Can't wait for chapter 2.

Excellent start to a wonderful story. Would love to see peter take the lead. Before this story concludes i hope to see tracy carrying peters baby and peter married to tracy adopting siobahn.

5⭐️

This is a great story so far. You did a great job of introducing the characters. So I'm looking forward to the next and hopefully many more chapters. 5⭐️

Excellent. Thoroughly enjoyed it. THANKS

DIANE IS A BITCH SISTER....AN ANNOYING BITCH OF A SISTER!!

DID THE SLUT BABYMAKER TRACY EXPECT CLEM TO COME RUNNING!!

SHE QUICK TO HANG WITH THE DA!!

SERIOUSLY, YOUR STORIES ARE GOOD BUT THIS JUST IRKS ONE!!

ONE IF YOUR NOT SO GOOD STORIES....GIVE THE GUY PETER A BREAK!!

THE SISTER DIANE IS JUST ABITCH THAT HE COULD DO WITHOUT!!

AS FOR TRACY, SHE CAN GO FUCK THE DA!!

Good job, thanks for sharing.

I like Tracy and her daughter, but Peter is useless. Let him grow a pair.

I don't usually write here before I finish the story, but after reading the stupid remarks from the first four idiots. I decided to give you, your normal 15 stars. Now I'll go back and finish reading the rest of you story.

I love the story, I think it is great. Waiting to read the next chapter. AAAAAA++++++