All Comments on 'Clem and Tracy Pt. 02'

It's your story and you tell it like it is. Nice simple love story about two people falling in love. Five stars from me.

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SAGE

An excellent tale. Well done.

Wonderful ending!

5

Loved it. As good as the rest of your stories, definitely worthy of 5 stars. Loved the comment about football, feel the same way. Keep up the good work.

Engaging story. Rounded up to a 5. I always look for your submissions.

Excellent story and very sweet. I always expect the best and you never disappoint me.

I was very happy to see the next chapter of this story because I just loved the first part. Was not disappointed with this chapter either, solid five stars. As for the ending, couldn't be any better, unless it was that Clem had knock the stuffing out of the dickhead DA for being such a conceited jerk. Guess it was better that Tracy just told him off and let it go. Well done.

Well done! Loved the story.

It's not that its bad, but really, i've not met many characters with a split personality more than Clem has. No wonder he has two different names and no one really uses his proper name. He goes from bully to likeable, from caring to ignorant, from 50 to 15 years old in ten seconds. I hope he doesn't go totally off the rails in years to come. Have to round it down to even it up, sorry.

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Great story. Very loving. I loved it. 5stats

Great job, thanks for sharing.

Another great story. Having a child in cooperated through the it just made it that more enjoyable. Another 10 stars. I've finished your list of great stories, Waiting To see more. Love your stile.

Your last sentence is exactly right. It drew the story together to a proper ending. A great story 10 stars.

My second time reading this great story, and it was as great as the first time. 11 stars.

Thank you for another great story. I really enjoyed the interaction of the daughter mixed through the story. She fit right in. 12 stars.

Your right, it did end without the kids growing up, but your also right that it would have taken away the reason how they got there in the first place. Again another great story. 10 stars. Maby latter on you can have a story on the kids growing, and having their own story.

Great love story. Thanks for writing it.

I'm not disappointed at all. You have to finish a story somewhere, and finishing slowly with the kids adjusting to growing up, is the right place to leave to leave it. Another great stoey. 15 Stars.

I read most of your story before, and finished it today. I'm glad you finished it the way you did. I really enjoyed your ending. I gave you a 15 stars then, and your new ending put the frosting on the cake. another 15 stars again.

Reading it again was just as good as the first time. You're a great writer. Another 15 stars.

Disappointing. Not because it wasn’t well written (it was) but because there was no sense of the wonderment of two deeply wounded people coming together. It was wham bam, let’s picnic.. feed a few carrots… have a picnic… oh your my destiny. You are a far better writer than that.

No disappointment here. Two fragile people making themselves and a small child happy. I enjoyed reading it and don't need any more.

Love the story. It was great. AAAAAA++++++