All Comments on 'Climate Change'

Cold.

The problem with 750 words is that it has to be concise. There sure would have been a lot of things happening after he throws her out of the house, buck naked, into the snow.

Boy Scouting or Indian blood. Good man!

That certainly was different. I think it needs some further information. Like why, and with whom.

I guess she'll freeze her butt off!

4

Kinda lame, really. He could have done so much more to make her life hell. I'll give it a 3, for not wasting too much of my time.

Good one! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Short and sweet

4 Stars. Interesting, vengeful, she definitely deserved it, but stripping her and shoving her outside without at least fucking her first isn't cool.

A clever story

Damn that was a good ending! Funny as hell way to get rid of a cheating slut wife!

Wonder if her nipples got hard and sore in all that cold snow air, before she made it to her lovers home, walking in the raw? :)

Damn I LIKE this short little ditty! 5 stars!

Loved the end

Excellent, makes my 750 word look rubbish.

No shit Sherlock. Hahahahaha. 5/5

More harsh. D

Great detective work. Final Solution. Freeze the Bitch. Quick 5 Stars.

The bitch pays. Like to see another chapter

Least was man enough to kick her out. A shame.

Hubby forcibly forces his naked wife into a winter night. Wife will go next door, call the police, who will come and arrest hubby for domestic abuse. Hubby will be automatically served with a restraining order so that he cannot return home until some future court hearing. Hubby will also have an arrest record. Wife will get everything in the divorce. I am sure that is the ending that the author intended but did not have chance to write.

the last paragraph made me smile.

she thought her husband was dumb enough not to notice.

thanks mr. jmm999 for this funny concise story.

In Canada shoving someone out in the snow when naked, and locking them out is called criminal negligence. I don't mind BTW but there are other ways of BTW. This cruelty reminded me of an experiment that the Nazis did when they threw people who had a particular origin into arctic waters to see how long a person could survive.

Not erotic. Boring. Pointless. Melodramatic. Cardboard characters. But mainly, not erotic.

And the cops picked him up for bodily assault and unnecessary cruelty, but hey, he felt good for about an hour. I have to wonder if the people who write these stories ever think beyond the end of their nose.

Well done! It's tough to do a 750 word short and get a complete story but you pulled it off. 5*

That bitch hit the ditch!

WTF? No anger, no angst? Three stars ⭐️ for this one.

Wow that was cold, literally.

I’m noticing an increasing rate of 750 word BTB stories lately. Gotta say, it makes perfect sense, except for the fact that it about 740 more words than BTB deserves.

Cute! A little detective work. As fiction, it was fun. As reality, he was much too calm unless he already knew for some time and had come to terms with it. That doesn't matter. I always wonder when stories talk about finding a strange car in the drive as if they live out in the middle of nowhere and no neighbors will notice. Neighbors always notice. This was a lot closer to reality in that regard as the parked car and footprints provided the evidence that sooner or later will always be there. Good story.

Not enough there.

Aaah,here we see a true example of "man-made" climate change.

Thanks

Probably should have let her keep the robe and slippers... but then again...

Reminds me of the David Essex song "It was only a winter's tale..."

Made me laugh.

WOW! This was not BTB it was FTB (Freeze The Bitch).

Just goes to show that you should never fuck around on Sherlock Holmes. Fun story, 5 stars.

Not much. Threw her out into the cold. If he didn't let her back. In a neighbor would have called the police and he could be arrested. So much for this short story going no where.except to divorce court.

original -- I like original; 5*

This will have our little pathetic troll creaming his underoos for sure. Anything with this lame macho posturing of a scorned husband. Apparently authors forget this is supposed to be an erotic literature site. Only the weak minded find this remotely erotic.

Well that was a waste of my time

Jeez, at least give us the sex scene with the wife and her lover.

🤣

That was classic! 5*

The last line saved it!

Love the last line

Thanks for writing

The last paragraph moved it from 4 stars to 3.

LMAO!! Tossed her naked ass out in the snow and sent the cheating skank off to her lover's house!

I think you should have left the last two lines out.

Short and sweet. Good on him, smart man.

Hope the divorce works out for him. Nice little short. 5*

Liked the detective work, but for me it didn’t really work as a short story as I would have liked more detail.

Only seven to eight percent of cheaters ever get found out. Another seven to eight toss it in their spouses' face, exposing themselves out of spite. And the other 85% never get caught. Sad reality... unless, it's a LIt LW story then the husband gets to be Colombo and catches his wayward wife. Science fiction has better odds of happening

She got playing around, way to easy to get caught with snow tracks.

"Waiter ! May we have another order of BTB, well done, please ?"

Cute, novel or at least new.to me discovery method.

I hope she freezes to death. Put the whoresicle body on the front lawn with a sign: sic semper meretrix!

ZK

Brief and brutal.

short and to the point. loved it

That was cold.

How is anyone giving trash like this good reviews?

Hmmmmmph. Once and done and gone.

Now that's how you BTB! 5 stars

Great short story. Thank you

The only issue I had was the misuse of the term "higher" in the opening paragraph [i.e. no building allowed higher than that]. "higher" eludes to height, not location. The seeming intention of higher situation on a map could only be claimed if a map view had been posed, but it hadn't.

Thus my score of two stars. Good thing you didn't appear in my courtroom. (humor)

Funny, too bad it was so short.

Now she has to explain things to her lover, and probably his wife too. Hope she doesn’t get cold feet.

Great tale! This MC has/had, "balls said the queen, if I ha 2 I'd be King". He showed her the whore door. ;)

Why did some readers give this a good review? Because it was a very well constructed short story: much said in just a few words.

Was this story about human beings? Great description of the evidence and the deductive reasoning, but the husband didn't seem to be all that surprised. And the wife didn't seem to be all that sorry. It was all so calculated and timed, like telling a joke instead of a story. Well done, that. Wish it had been a story, that included something about betrayal, cheating, motives and reasons, all the normal human emotions of adultery and discovery and consequences. All she got was the cold shoulder. See? Cute, but how satisfying was that? Thanks for the effort.

@Tralan69er Re: "That was cold." - Thank you Captain Obvious!

Enjoyable, and learned another way to cool a potentially white hot explosion.

@Kalimaxos - Sorry to point out that your comment is as irrelevant as you are, but...

Stories are typically written about the outliers. If you are correct in your 15% of 15%, that makes the main character of this story a special case and thus worthy of having a story written about them. So, rather than explaining why this story is invalid, you just explained why your argument is invalid.

I would love t see the story continued because is was so good.

More to the story isn't needed, just I didn't want to stop.

I think you froze her assets !

Cold, cold, cold! 🤪 4*

Too much.

Let the punishment fit the crime.

Not more, not less.

Good up to that point.

4 out of 5 from me.

He was quick and to the Point Good Bye!

Thanks I enjoyed this. Short and sweet (ok, ok bitter maybe)

Funny, Hubby is quite the detective. But as soon as wife calls the cops and screams Abuse, his ass will be in jail. Us guys just can't get away with throwing her cheating ass out. Like the story.

Well done. Thanks for writing!

I was prepared to hate what looked like a cucky conclusion until the last line. Nice.

Do you know what I just found out?

That at LW there are several experts, in percentage, pedagogy, psychology, linguistics, law, engineering, astrophysics, genetics...

Ah... do yourselves a favor, just enjoy the stories, fictional or with some basis in reality, opine about the characters' attitude, thoughts and behavior. Disagree on the beginning, middle and end... but let it be just that.

It's fun here. Only that.

But as I always write: this is just my opinion.

LOL good

Fun thinking that he'd throw the cabbage out, but once the neighbors call the police, he'd be in jail and she'd be in the house.

Funny story... Good ending. I read comments all the time and most of them are inept, stupid, jaded by anger or latent bi-sexual/s who love to read wimp shit.

Maybe just a little more time to get into the characters would be nice. Lol

LMAO Now thats cold

It was refreshing to read about something that would actually occur when catching your wife cheating. The fact that she was ready to have sex with him right after nearly being caught just tells you how depraved cheaters actually are, great depiction. My one logistical problem is that if she was caught during the act and he had to leave abruptly, why would she put her panties back on to get cum in them and then take a shower before he comes home. That doesn't make any sense. If the panties are from a previous encounter as may be evidenced by being deeper in the basket then they wouldn't still be wet although I suspect that was to indicate she had stuffed them down on purpose because they soiled.

Nothing like a slut freezing her "assets" in the snow!!

5 stars!!

yup

Good story, the cum in the undies had me scratching my head for a while, but some people don't bother taking of undies or even clothes to fuck.

Nothing wrong with leaving people to wonder what a naked woman out in the snow does next Ha ha ...... it's called imagining

A sequel wouldn't be bad though

Short, sharp, to the point, marriage over, On your way 5*

🤣

Was this the pilot script for "Naked and Afraid"? - 5☆

A fantastic fantasy! Deserving of more than 5 stars. So far all of this author’s stories are 5+.

Bill S.

Ah, fantasies!

And then what?? She died of the cold....banged on the door....ran to fuckboy....helped by neighbour!!

Cheating skank

A good start, but too short

Not bad.

This author has a tendency to write detective plots which is still good because rarely anybody around here is able to write a simple plot. LE is full of "writers" with 0 talent, it is refreshing to find one that has some.

Boy, if only...