by ContinentalPsyOp
very well done, spins out beautifully. feels realistic without being formulaic or tedious. that ending is such a delightful tease.
words cannot express how much I love this opening chapter. Sure, that last line blew my mind and I can't wait for what comes next. But the whole thing was beautiful. Lovely, realistic incest throughout, especially with what that last line promises is even yet to come! Stimulates so many thoughts and inferences in the mind, from what your words suggest and imply. SO SEXY! Truly excellent beginning. In a sea of cookie-cutter, male-power-fantasy "fauxcest" stories, this realistic approach of yours is so refreshing! I cannot thank you enough for this story and for the rest in this vein, and hope there is much, much more to come.