by WhitMan35
This story is so confusing and it is hard to keep track of who is who, let alone any plot points or character development. As a way of making sense, Rick seems to be fucking Frank Jr, father Frank Sr, brother Ronny, stranger Berto, dad’s best friend Steve, and jacking off with bro in law Dean. Is that everyone? Basically every one on the trip. They all seem to barely know (or not at all) about the others although Rick isn’t stealth about hiding it or sneaking off. And you’d figure he would constantly smell like cum or a guy’s ass. It’s all just too complicated to follow, let alone make sense of. And does he love Ronny the most, or who? It’s impossible to keep it all straight.
Don't worry about the hate comments, I hope you know that me and probably alot of others enjoy this story. I hope you put all of this in a book one day, I would love this in my collection. Looking forward to the next chapter!