All Comments on 'Club Fantasia Ch. 02'

Should’ve kept it to one guy. Oh well, still looking forward to next instalment, though.

Too many spelling and grammar errors. Poor sentence structure.

Oscar legend that he is, Jack & much of this is a poorly-written waste!

NEVER finished Page 1. Kate tells the narrator, "You said highlights", when she's actually quoting herself!

She would know that!!

Based on other comments, appears that it gets worse!!!