Wow that was a bit of a whirlwind! Enjoyed it, and hope that you keep fleshing out this exciting and stimulating universe with more cool world building!
I’ve always felt that erotica tends to take itself too seriously – a stick up its collective bum, as it were. For my part, I find the whole bumping of pelvises thing to be intrinsically comic. Fun in other ways, too - but still. I started out trying to write parodies of the g...