All Comments on 'Co-Ed'

by UnpublishedEroticaWriter

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago
Just use 'Said'!

You don't have to use a different verb after every piece of dialogue. It's super distracting, and made the story unreadable

MADDOGINTEXASMADDOGINTEXASalmost 2 years ago

Oh, ho, ho!!! You are a very funny writer; this last page made me laugh out loud...my wife asked me what is so funny, I just pointed at the screen!

I am going to look at your story page...is there a sequel?? If not, I AM GONNA BE VERY DISAPPOINTED!!

FIVE**5**STARS-excellent read, looking for more in the future!

UnpublishedEroticaWriterUnpublishedEroticaWriteralmost 2 years agoAuthor

@MADDOGINTEXAS Was it the sea cow line? I have taken this story as far as it can go. Most of my stories are just one and done. I do have many other interesting, original, funny stories you might also enjoy. Thank you for your positive comment.

Lobosolo51Lobosolo517 months ago

need to edit. example - Cassie "laminated" should have been Cassie "lamented" - actual story quite entertaining. keep up the good work.

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I like to write stories from a woman's (woman's) perspective because I'm weird. Every female editor I've had seems to enjoy reading them. One called my 'The Devil is in the Details' story "Hot as Hell." She was pretty proud of the pun. It gives me joy to bring a smile to someo...