by eroticauthor333
Good start.
Will they be pets with a leash, collar and bowl?
What about tongue, nipple, navel and clitoris piercings?
With humiliation and degradation?
Powerfully erotic chapter. I hope as part of controlling their clothing choices that he makes them dress sluttier and sluttier.
I like the way both of you think! Yes, I've certainly planned to have them dress sluttier... McKenna isn't going to be hiding her body so much at work anymore. And yes, at home they'll be pets and the leash & collar is just a given lol. I like the idea of piercings... will manage to do that. I thought about a few tattoos as well. And you can expect to see a lot more humiliation and degradation in the upcoming chapters :)
I vote for piercings. I also saw some prno art. A tattoo with white ink on dark skin should look incredible.
Good job clearing up the Jack/Ben issue. Chapters a bit short. About time for some public humiliation, because this threesome in an apartment gets tedious. I think the author is on the right track, with outward signs of ownership. If they cannot wear a collar at work, then something that signals slut. One thing, Jack will be a busy guy coming up with enough to keep two slaves occupied. Love the notion of tats and piercings.
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, the character’s name was gonna be Ben but I changed it last minute and somehow missed that typo lol. I will develop it outside of the apartment because, as you said, a constant threesome will get tedious.