All Comments on 'Coach Daddy Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

keep writing it so fgood

whatcouldofbeenwhatcouldofbeenover 8 years ago
I appoligize

I'd like to appoligize to my readers. This was kind of a premature submission. Lol. The first part of the next chapter should of been included in this one. And this should of had the discription of "A sissy is trained." The next chapter will be the "A sissy is claimed" submission. Thanks everyone for your votes and your awesome feedback. I appreciate it.

JD2100JD2100over 8 years ago
keep em coming!!!

I loved it and can't wait for the next chapter and even more after that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I soooo want to meet Daddy and Mommy

This is by far some of your best writing.

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
That he stands up for himself

And stops letting Beth use him for her own enjoyment. Why doesn't he simply bitch slap her and throw her out? Too one sided.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
just one question

Joey has been described as gay the entire time or as a straight girl. But immediately starts to lick Beth's pussy?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Yes. Yes. Yes. What ever it is titled it is so hot. More please?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Your story such a turn on. Would luv tto be Joey. Dee27060@ gmail.com

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