All Comments on 'Coach's Cutie Ch. 04'

You have such a beautiful, devious mind. I love it!

I’ve now read everything you have on this site. Your writing was very good in the stories dated earliest and has become better and better as time has progressed. Characters are both interesting and believable, situations imaginative, and dialogue usually expertly done. I can’t wait to see more of Maddie, Becca, and Greg; I can imagine several directions you might go and I really want to see how you choose to continue.

Well done!