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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Pity about poor editing and continuity

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Too many inconsistencies. She wasn’t wearing a bra then she was. She was on all fours then the carpet scraped her back? Booooo

emotional_masochistemotional_masochistabout 2 years agoAuthor

OP here. Listen y'all I kind of wrote this one while intoxicated. My apologies for the errors. My other works should be coherent. Don't write and drink y'all.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This isn't cnc, it's just nc

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Please don't listen to others. I absolutely loved this, Def want a continuation. Maybe chapters of them having a threesome and when poppy gets pregnant!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wow i would love more :D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful story.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Fantastic and original, please write part 2!

AnonymousAnonymous4 days ago

Part 2?

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A girl who just likes to escape to other worlds. Humming through words, hope you enjoy my stories!