All Comments on 'Coffee'

by LiminalHominid

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zooliciouszoolicious11 months ago

Not my cup of coffee, so to speak. But, it would be fun to watch this in public. Very descriptive.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Very hot. Impromptu public sex with an absolute stranger can definitely be a great way to break the ice!

norcal62norcal6211 months ago

There's such a thing as over writing.

Frank66Frank6611 months ago

Way too much dialogue. Ha! But seriously, I've never read a story like this one- very clever. And that one line didn't need to be there. A wink, a nod, a gesture, and a whole complete story could have happened without one single word expressed. Still, nicely done.

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