All Comments on 'Coitus Interruptus Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
A bit short, but shows promise

Interruptus & amenable

Fine tale, if a bit quick. I’m not sure how you’d add to it, though.

You seem to have a talent for narrative. Keep writing.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

I realize it's third world, but don't they do ancestry testing in Canada?

XluckyleeXluckylee8 months ago

3 stars from Xluckylee

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