All Comments on 'Collected'

This is a rarity. It's simply a good story. Well written, well put together, a solid beginning, a solid middle, and a solid end. One of the best short stories I've read here, and in the group of good short stories not here.

If you're looking for spank material, this probably isn't it, but don't skip it.

The whole story came together in that last line. Not really believable, but who cares? It was thoroughly enjoyable, and that's what we like. Well done. Five stars from me, -- JB