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by Quixerotic1

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scarf7cescarf7cealmost 3 years ago
Great start

Can't wait to read more. You're gifted!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

There's too much exposition for the it to be a good action-based story, and there's too many gaps for it to be a good plot-based story. Either throw the audience into a story filled to the brim with sex scenes, or actually put in the effort to come up with a setting that actually makes sense.

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I have always enjoyed a particular type of erotica, the kind that focuses on our own base desires overcoming our sense of reason or decorum. Through fantasy or far flung science, my characters explore their sexuality's limits, often with transformative results. For everyth...