All Comments on 'College Teacher's Blonde Babysitter'

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Needs an ending

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I wanted to like this more but the ‘telling’ rather than ‘showing’ kept me from staying invested in the story and characters. All the numbers used (everyone’s ages in parentheses, precise height and penis length, her measurements) are examples of what I mean by telling. “Her hips were tiny to the point of being off-balance compared to her full chest, both now pressed close against his fit, toned body. /She had to reach up on her toes to find his lips. /Her hands could not come close to wrapping around his thick cock, far longer than any man she had ever seen” are examples of ‘showing’ instead.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Sebastian ought to put q huge load of love pee in Lacey's unprotected pissy. Then she could babysit her child and step-children...

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