All Comments on 'Come a Little Bit Closer Pt. 03'

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SomaSlaveSomaSlave10 months ago

Not my normal cup of tea (pun intended), but well written and with more feeling than the usual story on the subject. One question: did they get that vacation?

MVP6MVP610 months agoAuthor

You know…it’s not my cup of tea either. But I wanted to explore what would happen when a man meets an amazing girl but she has a major sexual ‘flaw’. In the trilogy I tried to really show how much he grew to live for her and struggled. I’m glad you found good things in the story. From now on they won’t do things with anyone else. He might get challenged with butt stuff. Could it happen on vacation? Only if that setting is needed for the story. What do u all think?

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Love the premise but sadly it rambled too much. Hoping to see another similar story but hopefully it is a better thought out path

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