All Comments on 'Come and Get It'

Here is something new and that's a rare thing on LW. Well done, too, but it's only a vignette and not even a compete scene. In fact, it stops at the climax of the scene ("I'm pregnant") and leaves us hanging. It could be the basis of a pretty good story if you continue it. I'm not a fan of short-short stories as you might surmise.

...pregnant and soon to be a single mother.

Yes, I liked the story. But it leaves so many unanswered questions. Please complete so we all know "What happened?". Cheers.

Good job. People are asking "What happened," but that's the point of a vignette.

Needs an ending…….anyone?

The end!

another half story - whats the point?

1 star - I know it's 750 words but you still had shown absolutely no downside or punishment for the bitch, and the guy will now go to jail because of her.

Another tale to move to the new category "Hating wives".

If you can’t finish the damn story don’t post it!!

Short 750 words stories are a fun read but they're like that first handful of salty potato chips (crisps), you can't help but want more if they taste good.

This handful tasted great.