All Comments on 'Come for a Visit, Stay for Life Ch. 04'

Finally, someone agrees that suicide is preferable to torture and maiming.

But the truth of his torture is that he is already suffering from infection and being pissed on won’t help. You should have given him a fever and puss leaking from his wounds. Not to mention blowflys leaving egg sacs on his skin or the myriad of insects that are drawn to the scent of blood and infection.

Watching pass out from blood poisoning would have been realistic and a very real possibility.

Very imaginative and well written.

Please keep writing.

I'm just here for the plot at this point haha. I think the MC's reaction here was probably one of the few sane reactions in this type of genre. I think you probably could have made it darker or more dicey with Annie catching him a third time only to get her prize taken when they find out how bad she is, but I like the decision here nonetheless.

Aurora...a place where Hillary can finally be elected!

I like it much!

well written.

for my liking it could contain a bit more sexuality, humiliation, pleasuring of the huntresses ;-)

This story has gotten outrageously dumb. Not for the concept, but the first time the guy says something he whines about his wounds and not stating his case. And why not rip the tags on of his ear. He hasn't fought back one bit. Obviously written by a woman.

Do stories written by women bother you?