All Comments on 'Comforting the Brothers Pt. 06'

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ShelbyDawn57ShelbyDawn578 months ago

You and your Disney Princesses. Loving these newer chapters to Lana's story. So hoping for a happy ending...

curricdcurricd8 months ago

There are plenty of twists and turns. The romantic in me wanted Lana to get back with Mark but your ending was more realistic. (I also like how you "snuck" in Disney World.)

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Well amazing story and like others it said I was hoping for Lana and Mark to make it but I agree it was very realistic and this just sort of works. Can't wait to see the next two chapter of your amazing writing

curricdcurricd8 months ago

Oops! I guess there is at least one more chapter.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I hope Sean is a dirt bag that doesn't call her back and shows up at the next function with a hot bitch. She needs to feel the pain she spooned out to Mark. She sure jumped on the first cock that showed interest. Maybe Mark will show up one day with a beautiful woman with a baby bump and engagement ring. Her engagement ring.

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Long time reader, new author. Prefer longer stories with character background. Hoping to write stories in multiple categories.