All Comments on 'Coming Home'

You do have a way with words. The fact that you arrange them in such an erotic way doesn't hurt either.

The ending could have worked in closer to the story. Except for minor technical issues, I liked it quite a bit.

I thoroughly enjoyed your story!

I really liked this one a lot. There was a lot of love in it and that's something I like to see in Erotic Couplings stories. My only suggestion is that you have one of the volunteer editors look over it for you. There are just a few technical errors I noticed that would add more professionalism to your story if they were fixed. Great job, please keep them coming!

you were doing all those wonderful things to me. Thank you for a perfect little interlude.