All Comments on 'Coming to Know God'

OK, I didn't see that ending coming, but I love it! Well done and well written.

Hot sex, good use of religion for character struggle and jokes.

Liked this a lot, well developed and nicely irreverent.

Hiya Ash. Good job on getting your story out there. I think your grammar and punctuation are great. The flow of the story is working well too. You have a really good proofreader and editor.

I like how you tied the ending together. Funny stuff. Keep writing. I'd like to see you develop your skill.

Excellent. The Catholic Church is one of the most evil, inhumane institutions on earth. Well written. Cheers.

Great plot twist at the end. Ditto on well written.

Being Catholic, I could relate to Ashley's conflicts. This made the sex part more real and more intense.

I laughed..I cried..I reminsced your family reminded me so much of mine early on in my life..but damn you Ash..I now know I an going to Hell.so many adulterer sins I have ...who knew...Tho..mom always said..masterbation is a sin...

So very well done, SCA!

Loved it! Such good writing!

Another hit Ashley! Even us Baptists had the same conflicts! Well done, can’t wait for the next installment!

So accurate about catholic guilt. Fun story. Guilt makes for the best sex ever.

So glad I discovered you. I can’t wait to read your other stories.

God speaks in mysterious ways!!!

A long buildup which kept my attention and yearning to know what comes next! Or who cums next!

As a former evangelical protestatn Rverend I know all too well the ridiculous taboos around sex the church places on what God supposedly created!! It does however make for lots of kinky, taboo, sacrilegious fun to break them!!

Kneel and pray, Come to Christ, let my rod and staff comfort you, so your soul will rise in ecstasy as I enter your pearly gates of paradise, filling you with sacred seed, two becumming one, a union of bodies and souls!

There's an old quip, "Good girls go to heaven--bad girls go everywhere." Great story, worthy of six stars.