All Comments on 'Commercial Sales Ch. 02'

I guess shes not that happily married if she can cheat without even the slightest hesitation or guilt.

Not her first affair, i’m guessing.

Should it not be in gay and lesbians section?

Wonderful. Perfect writing skills and vivid undertakings. I can't wait to see what transpires when Jay gets home.

After part 1 I figured she was going to be the next corporate whore. Now we just have to wait and see how many chapter until her husband finds out and is he going to accept it, join in, or cry as he gets divorced.

I think the writing is OK but so far nothing to really keep me wanting more or nothing to make this stand out over the other hundred or so corporate whore stories.

Same old cheating skank story. In this case a cheating lesbian wife. Who apparently is hit by the skank lesbian slut ray. No thought for the husband. I guess men think with their dicks. Well her cunt is thinking for her. Let's hope the husband finds out and ditches the lesbian skank.

So Kate turns out to be not the nice, faithful wife she was initially portrayed as. She is really a cheating slut. But even worse, she's obviously doing it for all the money she will earn. That makes her a whore, as well.

Not exactly a "loving wife", is she?

Having the wife put the moves on her instead of the husband wasn't what I was expecting when this chapter started.

Not really making much sense, a happily married mother suddenly succumbs to sex with a woman she hasn’t known for more than 24 hours. Allows herself to drink excess alcohol whilst supposedly having a business meeting. Starting down a slippery slope to perdition and to forgetting that she has a husband at home.

A fun and exciting story of consenting people enjoying life. Great storytelling and well written. Interesting characters that we can have fun with. Thanks for publishing it. Cheers and ready for more chapters.

Great read. Thanks

The two parts I've read show me an eye for detailed writing. You're able to create nuances, subtleties, and even a sense of mild sense of cognitive dissonance, extending down to a granular, visceral level. Authentically, you have nobody who is perfectly polished and erudite, spouting perfectly-crafted lines. Instead, they communicate and fumble a bit, like real people do. You get flawed characters, which creates conflict and stress, which is where good writing is born. Yes... Very realistic and well-crafted writing. Storytelling, actually. 5/5!!!

I wonder if Matt is Kate's pimp?

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Hat?? No strap on dildo and stuff? Sex room?

Dr beulahthemick; Very well written, dialogue is believable and the action not rushed, Kate is going to enjoy working in Commercial Sales if it means working at Mikki's home, this certainly is a new take on WFH, sadly as a Head of Year at a girls High School we had to go in, even during lockdown. However I'm prepared to change career if it means added benefits like this.

How can anybody give this garbage a five star rating. Idiots. 1*

Good continuation. Did not foresee story taking this direction this early, like it.

Lot of floof.

Lot of floof.