All Comments on 'Committee Work Ch. 04 - Confession'

I think it had huge potential to be a really sexy story but it’s way too fucked up for me.

Religion : I’d never consider myself to be religious in any way but neither do I think it’s ok to mock somebody else’s religious beliefs. It’s a massive turn off.

BDSM : usually a massive turn on but this guy seems dangerously naive, utterly clueless. I know you’re only submitting short segments but with BDSM it pays to show the details otherwise the wannabe Dom just looks stupid and dangerous.

Best of luck with your writing, I’m out.

Tess (UK)

I appreciate your comment. This is not the rabbit hole I intended when I started the series. Sorry to lose you. Do you think that I should back the two Barb stories out and recalibrate? Or just let the series whither?