by Kapricorn71
Looking forward to more!
That was great
Elle x
I liked the reversal of the roles we commonly see here. She "liked seeing his white hands on her skin", which was refreshing coming from the woman instead of a black male. You could continue this story, or leave it as is, but nicely written.
I know several lovely ladies with dark skin which I would LOVE to get to know better. This story is really sweet, unless her hubby doesn't approve. MOST men I know like her hubby WOULD NEVER approve. Still, it's a nice thought, that people can sometimes let themselves and their mates have fun when off alone...without going crazy about it!
I am a fan of wm/bw stories, but I didn't like this one. Also, you should consider using the services of a volunteer editor before your next submission.
Out of town business meetings are a leading cause of infidelity.
We would know!