All Comments on 'Competition Ch. 11 - FINAL CHAPTER'

by Talusmanic

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Anonymousover 2 years ago

Fuck this ending bro. And fuck you for killing off Jolene like that. Things were so perfect and then you gotta go and kill off Jolene like that? Come on man. That's a real weak ending there.

Talusmanic over 2 years agoAuthor

All I can say is I'm sorry for killing her off. I do appreciate that you take the characters and the stories so seriously, so I'm not mad. I'm just illustrating that tragic things do happen and life must go on. Hey, at least Ronnie has a miracle baby, right? Thanks for reading, and I hope you stay with me.

Nicole2023 5 months ago

Yeah didn’t like that conclusion. Jolene could have carried using Ronnie egg.

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