All Comments on 'Complicated Ch. 05'

Post your story in EROTIC COUPLINGS, not one part of it is ROMANTIC!!! I'm done reading this while waiting for the romance that's never going to come.

Does Max plan on romancing her now that he isn't with Jenna? There hasn't really been anything romatic yet. I guess she considers the way Max dominates her as romantic.

I appreciate readers taking the time to leave comments or mail me feedback.

I feel I need to remind the readers of my note at the start of chapter 1. Complicated is not a series. It's just one story that I submitted to Lit in chapter form (I submitted the entire story over a week ago).

I've realised that when looking at the chapters individually they don't appear very romantic, because I didn't write them as individual stories. However, I can see merit in the feedback of changing the story category- I'll submit the change request once the admin is done updating all chapters.

And apologies for the typos and grammatical errors- I need to work on my editing skills. :)

it is romance without drama... all romance need not begin with cheesy lines

great work..

PLEASE dnt stop writing Romance.