All Comments on 'Computer Repairman'

This ended up being pretty hot, but the customer made me angry as hell with that threat. Still, if he was that nice in the end, he probably wouldn't have made any trouble anyway. I imagine it was just a scare tactic to get what he wanted from the Tech. This was a well written ***** story, thanks. MLF

Customer was an asshole. I don’t like threatening and non-consensual stories. With a different tone, this could’ve been hot. But you can’t tell a rapey story, and then at the end, just say “but I liked it and he was nice” and make it all ok.

If the story was true, you seem to offset how awful it is. Actually, you would not submit it if you not enjoy it.

story was good and i enjoyed it. my one critique would be to get an editor for the grammar and spelling. a few mistakes can mess up a story. keep writing though, i like where your head is.