by moofioo
You're definitely on the right track. Let's see how the next installment pans out.
I really enjoyed the story. I liked the character"s awkwardness.
Looking forward to you developing the story further. Does he travel down a dark path towards more conditioning and becoming more of a monster?
Has she always known all along what he was doing and had been interested in him, so is using all of this to actually seduce him?
So many different ways you can take this story!