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Click hereJohn whispers words that the pleasure burns deeper into Niki's subconscious. "You love obeying me. You love serving me. You love being my slave. Obeying me is your purpose in life."
Finally, he is left holding a limp, semi-conscious Niki in his arms. "Niki, don't fall asleep. I am not finished with you yet."
John lowers Niki to the floor. Her hands are still tied behind her back, so she ends up with her knees, shoulders and the side of her face on the floor and her ass in the air. Her limp form starts to collapse sideways to the floor. A sharp slap on each butt cheek brings her conscious mind back enough for her to stay in position.
John is almost painfully aroused now. He quickly moves up behind Niki and grabs her hips. He slams his erection all of the way into her. He pauses a moment to enjoy the sensation. "Niki, tell me who you are."
"Yes Master."
John begins urgently pounding in and out of Niki. She begins to recite the Truths that are already burned into her brain. She can only manage one word with each thrust. "I'm....your....slave....and....I....love....obeying....you....Master. I'm....your....slave....and....I....love....obeying....you....Master."
Just before he cums, John reaches around Niki's waist and furiously rubs her clit. When John blasts her cunt with semen, Niki has another mind-blowing orgasm. Her words become all rushed together. "I'mYourSlaveAndILoveObeyingYouMaster."
When John is finished, he lets go of Niki's hips and she collapses sideways to the floor. He unties her apron, which releases her hands. After cleaning himself with her apron, he drops it beside her.
Meanwhile, Niki continues to whisper. "I'm your slave and I love obeying you Master." She is unknowingly carving these words deeper and deeper into her brain's neural pathways, ensuring her a lifetime as John's obedient play-thing.
Good story. I hope for a chapter 2 soon. I want to lnow what will happen with John and Niki
Please learn how to use past tense while writing. Yours is difficult to read because you break this grammatical rule so much. Thank you.
And has the brains of a doorknob, how long before she’s kicked out of school and living at home? Then what? She can’t form a coherent thought so she just sits there is a semi-vegetative state? That’ll be good for the muscle tone.
Here’s an idea, how about not turning her into a goddamn robot you half-wit? Oh I know, that’ll mean you actually have to work on character progression and make a plot that doesn’t involve non-stop fucking.
How does he plan on supporting the two of them? He’s a junior, so unless he wants a job bagging groceries because he’s an idiot, and that’s assuming he doesn’t go to prison, then he better gave a plan that actually involves work. And that means, dear author, YOU need to do more than just write a fuck story about a cheerleader getting fucked until she’s a retard.
I really loved the control mechanics. But absolute puppetry easily loses all dramatic tension. I would have liked for it to go on much longer.