All Comments on 'An EDM Show Ch. 01'

Figured you'd stick to the photoshoot theme or stick to non-penetration for a few more chapters.

Sex intense but not as erotic as “photo shoot” piece because of the mixed message Todd scene — obviously what you intended. Could not escape feeling/image of rape which is anything but erotic. Will look forward to more from your wicked imagination.

Well written story. Beautifully described desperate wanting.

Liked until she didn’t throw Todd off her, stop him, or tell his wife what he did. It’s one thing to seduce a woman who is awake and alert and consciously wants it. But it’s something else entirely to rape a woman who is clearly drugged with the intention of taking advantage of her.

I look forward to more of your stories. I do like your style and perspective. It’s refreshing reading something intelligent, well written and erotic without leaning towards gratuitous, teenage boy-style porn like so many people write here.

Another hot story, little more edgy so reader beware. A true non consent entry. The lust in both parties is palpable.

More!

Not a fan of the non-consent genre, but the rest of this was hot