by LonelyMom
Your skills are improving, and I am enjoying the story as it unfolds.
This story's coming along well.
The author catches the flavour of the times nicely.
You convey the memories as if they happened yesterday.
Some memories can be kept fresh for decades, and you do very well in conveying them to us. It’s also nice to see the subtle changes in the couple’s interactions as they gain some initial experience together.