by brendachaplin2000
Computer generated voice detracts from the story. Would have been better as text.
Maybe actually narrate it versus using a voice-bot. A person talking adds those wonderful subtlies that "Alexa" can't recreate... Like the pauses, emphasis on keywords, the little breaths one takes before they speak. :)
But LOVED the story.
The computer voices were very distracting and took away from the experience.
Horrible digital voices destroy any possible seductiveness or pleasure. Could not listen past the first "male" voice's sentence. We need more female contributions, but with real, nuanced readings. Sorry, this piece is just annoying.
Great story, would have been 4 or 5 stars if a human had been reading it. Sadly the AI detracts so much, I think 3 is being generous!