All Comments on 'Consequences of a Lie'

Wonder what horrendous wrong she did to warrant this abuse..

Burnt his toast ?

Too much milk in his coffee ?

Dared to breath ?

The title of this is consequences of a lie, but you don't say anything about the lie at all. If he wants her to know what she did wrong, shouldn't he be talking it through with her? Partly, for the reader's sake too?

Another dominant gone too far!

what was the lie? This is not enuf.

This is abuse, this sorry excuse for a human being should go to prison for a long time for assault and battery. Is he trying to put her in hospital?

It's an interesting start. Since it ends on a cliff hanger, I am hoping there will be more. Ignore the idiots who keep posting negative things, seriously, if they're not into it, why are they reading it? I like this story so far, I hope you write more, even if you choose not to post it here. -ZF-

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