All Comments on 'Continental'

A convoluted introduction to what sounds like a bullshit plot. All the "he's" make it hard to follow. It was too short even as a prologue.

The tag list was almost as long as the story.

What a hot mess!

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Moronic!

so, was there a story in there?

Dashiell Hammett would hate this.

What has this got to do with loving wives

Sorry, I don't understand this!

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Very spacey and short on development. At least the writer could have included some graphic sex…

So you are writing a follow-up story that contains are the secret code to make this a story?

Must have missed the story...

The tags were longer than the story. You have some good ideas, but somehow never turn them into complete stories.

Je nes comprends pas.

S4t1re❓️

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AMerryman

P.S. HA, ha,😀😄😆