by Andy5v
The whole story was ok, but you really need to learn to spell and proper grammer. I realize this is fiction, but due to poor grammer and spelling, it was hard to follow. Find an EDITOR before submitting any more!
It's a good story, but is in desperate need of a good editor. Hope to see more.
This was my favorite by far, ruining pure Christians girls is so hot. Too bad the author disappeared.