All Comments on 'Controversial Spanking Law Pt. 01'

This story began with a lot of promise. It needs an author who will do it justice.

Pitiful!

It's ended just like that???? Did you get tired or uninspired or had to go somewhere suddenly???

The abrupt end left me hanging.

Very interesting scenario, could lead in many directions, please write more!

Could have been great…ended up meh.

Well, too much of an abrupt ending. Did her father get a hardon while he spanked her? She went into some kind of subspace during the spanking but how long did it go on? Hopefully there is a limit on how many slaps with a hand, cane, belt, tawse, cat-o-nine-tails, paddle, etc. There has to be some limit on how long the spanking can go. What kind of welts or bruising can be done? Glad to know that there is some limit on the sadistic nature of some men. I do hope that the punishment for unreasonable cruelty or sadism is not limited to just castration. However who sets the limits for "unreasonable" or "sadistic" cruelty? A reasonable good start. Please continue.

I like this!

The story has great potential especially if it expands outside this one family group and shows the reactions of others, family friends etc, as a result of this law coming to pass.

On a personal note it may me consider my reactions in response to such a law. Actually it made me craft a list in my head of who I would visit if such a law came in to existence in our reality! LOL!!!

Can’t wait for more