All Comments on 'Converging Destinies Ch. 03'

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WerewolfEnthusiast over 12 years ago

oh plssss

oh please let michael tell veronica to take a hike an be in time to save bree from possibly getting rapped by that biker dude who is the reincarnation of the douche bag. anyway love this story so far and cant wait to read more from you.

Anonymousover 12 years ago

yea

don't let her get raped ok

Anonymousabout 12 years ago

Great story development, but

still to many errors. Dropped letters, incorrect word usage and new paragraphs in the middle of sentences.

Would give it a 5 if I could, but that wouldn't be right to all of those really good stories that have been edited well.

I didn't like English class since middle school, but I now know most of what is correct and what isn't.

Please get an editor, or if you have one and they are editing your work, get a new editor.

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