All Comments on 'Conversation Took a Left Turn Ch. 02'

Please lose the Microsoft for proof reading and writing your stories, it's a totally worthless program for writing and proofreading! Use Text Aloud instead, you'll be glad you did. You can use it to write and correct your mistakes and listen to the story while picking up your type O's. I hope you take this as Constructive Criticism, it is what it is! Yes I have the credentials, 22 years. No, I don't write, it wasn't my job to write. Still, 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS! and a big thank you for a great story!