All Comments on 'Coquettish Etiquette Ch. 01'

Thanks for reading! More is on the way! This was a really fun little "freebie" commission for Carol_J. let me know if you'd like to see more!

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Please write more!!

What a fun slice of seduction. Love the dialog and the descriptions of the poor hero's mental state. Great world building in a short amount of time. Thanks for the read!

Thanks, G.G.! This is the way! Wooo!

Wow, I came to this just because I regularly check your works, as your writing is sublimely enticing.

But... wow. From the premise it wasn't really what I'd like, as I see goblins as a common (and, I apologize for my bad taste, *boring and unattractive*) humanoid race while I'd enjoy monster girls much, much more but... It was what my sexual mood was looking for, apparently, as I managed to ger off by this work alone with barely a touch on my own

This is awesome! Bellydance and hypnosis are my absolute favourite fetishes, this is sooo hot!!!

Absolutely loved it! I'd love to see a sequel where Balsam keeps trying to escape but is dumbed down into submission every time.

More of this, it was fantastic!

ANY stories involving shortstack-goblin-girls are ALWAYS welcome! There is so much visual content of goblin-girls getting with human studs, yet so few writers who make stories about them. Keep up the good work!

Loved It! I think I would have cum a lot sooner!

Hi Nicole, love ypur work so much more than is healthy 😉 so please accept this constructive criticism from a dumbstruck admirer - the pacing on this one felt just a little off? Like she revealed her plan too early then spent too long bringing it to fruition?

Anyway, still loved the story, and followed every bounce of that lucky diplomat's enslavement with jealous fascination! Thank you yet again! - Ted