All Comments on 'Corrupted by the Naughty Diary 02'

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Voyer79Voyer79about 2 years ago

I can’t wait for that next one, I wonder will she ever find out that her stories are coming true

chipmonk9chipmonk9about 2 years ago

I hope you write ch.3 soon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I wish you write more chapter on this series. She could write about her teachers, the people from school (bullies, nerds, cheerleaders and their coach), her cuckquean mom and her family (sister, brother, etc).

akakage74akakage74almost 2 years ago

I really enjoyed this chapter, 5 stars from me. Just a pity that you didn't include some sister on sister action.

grhkemgrhkemover 1 year ago

A bit confused !!!

You keep plugging the underage angle (Ch 2) but they are 18 so what country is this story based in?

I enjoyed the sex scenes except for the underage being mentioned so much......pls explain...ta

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Childish writing.

---Not turned on in the slightest...

---bored to the point a stopped reading before the second twin gets popped.

... THAT'S PRETTY DAMN BORING.

---OBVIOUSLY written by foreign authors using CUT & PASTE;

---Grammar mistakes made that are common to non-native speakers/writers

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Erotic author been writing since 2013. I've had two stories blocked by literotica for being written by AI, Bimbo App Santa's Naughty Gift 3 & Mommy's Incubus Son Comes of Age 14. That one was rejected 4 times despite my protests. Talked to site admin and she just sent me a lin...