All Comments on 'Corrupted Desire Ch. 02'

This is good. I like your stuff. The first time I read “Learning her Place”, I cried lol. Idk why. You do that push pull thing between sadists/masochists really well. If that’s even a thing. Anyway keep writing!

Was he spawned full formed or of a hunk of hellfire?

Is he an evil human soul that escaped Hell?

One of the original Fall Angels that fell with Lucifer?

Perhaps even the Adam from the Garden of Eden?

Yeah, I tried to like this one too, but hard haaaaard pass. Making her fuck a married stranger was .. sick on so many levels.

Best incubus story I've read

End of chapter 2 and neither character is any closer to being even remotely likeable. I'm really trying to like this, but.. Here's hoping chapter 3 gets better.