All Comments on 'Costly Mistake Pt. 03'

The story would read much better if it were compressed into a single entry. I gave you 3 stars because, while your writing wasn't bad, it wasn't particularly good. Someone should be having fun, whether it's the bosses and/or the wife but the sex was fairly desultory for this reader. More passion and emotion would go a long way.

Great story,is there more to come ?

Thanks for your honest appraisal