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by Lord_Grin

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LenardSpencerLenardSpencerover 2 years ago

If English isn't your first language then I suggest you get a good editor. This sounds like it was written by a 15 year old teenage boy. Keep writing and you will slowly improve. Cheers.

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Shit's changed, I write revenge now. I'm sick of reading about weaklings who deprive themselves of simple thoughts and problem solving skills and just blame it on luck.