All Comments on 'Countdown'

I love stories that surprise me, and this story did just that. Very different, intriguing. In other words I loved it. Also it was well written, not plagued with the errors that some have (including submissions of my own). I am not being critical of others, I am just impressed with your writing. I hope there is more to come. Thank you.

Very creative. I enjoyed it. Many thanks. Cheers

Great story! I would love to see a second part.

It was a nice little story and well written. Although the ap being so aware and knowledgeable of her surroundings (having the money waiting for her art the hotel and knowing the swimsuit was $58) should have freaked her the hell out.

I would have also felt better in the married with children guy on the plane would have been a stand up guy and not given her his number. Although for her to get the flight attendants number right in front of him minutes later was a nice touch.

I hope you continue this.

That was a really great story. I also hope for a continuation.

Great idea, turned into a great story. Well written, with no real errors - altogether a fun read. 5*

Bit short, but would love too see a part 2