All Comments on 'Couple Swap'

Been there, done that. so much fun.

Such an erotic story. Love your discription and fluid writing style. Great work.

This story would be so much better if you hadn’t used the present tense. The flow and readability make your erotic little tale into something which is stilted and lacks reality. Pity, but thanks for the idea and characters.

Would like to tell you it was an earth shakerbut it wasn't. It seemed staged. Not that only it was to cute it had great outline promise, but characters were not natural or human enough.

Good story but it needs an editor. Frequently pronouns such as you and me are mixed up in the same sentence. It destroyed the flow of the story. I liked the idea of two couples going to a party knowing that they were going to swap after the party.