All Comments on 'Cousin Mary'

Good first story. Keep writing. Work in some hesitation, tension and release in your future stories. Bring the reader to a climax just like your characters; less like a book report.

Such a shame they didn't stay together after a long time together

Enjoyed!

liked your idea of the new Tag oldies/oldies left on review of Joe Hartley's garden/nudist story .. why not already!!