All Comments on 'Covid Conquests Ch. 03'

by TQM

Sort by:
  • 8 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Numbering Problem ?>

Part TWO does not appear to have been issued as yet.

Lit Index has only

Covid Conquests Ch. 01 (4.28) 02/08/21

Covid Conquests Ch. 03 (x.xx) 02/26/21

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xabout 3 years ago

This is the second chapter, so why does it say Chapter 3?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Great story

Please keep writing I loved it

TQMTQMabout 3 years agoAuthor
Hi all.

There is a time gap between Chapter 1 and Chapter 3. I'll leave Chapters 2 and 4 unwritten. You can, if you wish, imagine these chapters for yourself to close the gaps in time.

There is much truth to this story - so in reality there was a chapter 2 and 4. I'm just not sure they were worth writing about.

Labelling it chapter 3 I realize is contentious. But this was my reasoning, and I'll take the blame for it!

OOAAOOAAabout 3 years ago
AMAZING STORY!!!!!

Congratulations for this AMAZING story!!!!!

You are one of the greatest dialogue writers, increasing the excitement of the story with each sentence!!!

A Crown Jewel story! ;-)

Superhot the comparisons with the husband and make the wife tell everything in a step by step way!!!

OOAAOOAAabout 3 years ago
And the final part....

....leaves us hungry for more ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

These stories are amazing, can't wait to read about Angela. It'd be great if she had a bf as well. That said I think you run on a little long, saying the same things in slightly different ways. I understand it, especially how the story progresses, but i think its unnecessary. I think 2-3 pages per story is best. Jus my opinion tho.

Btw I really liked Jennifer's longing as well

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Express trip to divorce court...

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous